Reflection

When I was writing the easiest thing that I found was just making up what ever I want to during the story. The most challenging thing was trying to put the facts into the story with out making the story sound bad. I think I used my time wisely because I got most of my story done in class even though I had to bring it home to finish. If I had to make my story better I would make it longer so that it could go into more detail like a regular book.

Reporter

1: Hi there Erwin, how are you?
2:I am doing great
1:Can you tell us a little bet about yourself?
2: Sure, I live in Gettysburg, Pennsylvania with my mother, father, and two other brothers. We have a house and a farm where we raise so we can have food and milk. On the farm I have a favorite animal named, George which a horse that I have been taking care of him since I was 4. Both of my brothers have a dog that they share and take care of, it's name is Max.
1:How are you parents?
2:They are good parents they help us with any problems that we have.
1:Thank you
2: Sure

Free Writing

I think that writing on our blogs are to help us with a vocabulary. We will also get practice with our typing skills. When ever I'm about to start to write my mind sometimes goes blank for a while until I start to think harder and harder until I find a topic to write about. Once I know what I'm going to write about I start to come up with things that go along with that the main topic that I had thought of. After that I just go off and start to write down everything that comes to my mind.

Free writing

"Stop" said billy as he was getting thrown in to the full garbage can. The person that was throwing him in was a big, strong, person that hated school, his name was john. So he took his anger out on anyone that looked at him and started to talk behind his back. Every day he beats up at least one person, and the reason why he doesn't get caught is because if you tell on him he would beat you up too.
But one day a new kid came to school and saw that other kids where getting beat up by john. No one told him that if you tell on him you would get beat up, so he went and told the principal which got john in trouble. Now that the kid told on him he decided to try to beat him up, but as he was a teacher and the principal came out and brought him into the office. That was the last time they had ever seen him, some people thought that he got expelled, others thought that he was sent to JUVY.

Historical Fiction Story

1: Erwin- "No stop"
2: George- "Not until you give me all of the money that you have"
1: Erwin- "Why do you want my money"
2: George- "So that I can get money to by candy"
1: Erwin- "That's what I was going to do with it"
2: George- " To late"
1: Erwin- "Get back here"
2: George- " You can't get me"
1: Erwin:- " Here I come"
2: George-" No......"
1: Erwin:- " Yes I got my money back"

Young People in the Civil War

I don't think that the age limit is correct because I don't think that kids should have to go through that punishment, when they see other people getting killed right next to them. They should also make it so that if they wanted to join the army the could but if they don't, they don't have to. And at the end of the war millions of kids were orphaned because they were forced to go in to the army, since their fathers or brothers went into the army too.

Steam of Consciousness

"Fire" I can do this, maybe I can't. "You can do this" says the back of my mind as a stand ready for the next round of shoots to go off. "Fire" says the general, so I slowly pull the trigger and then "bang", I jump since I'm not use to all of the loud noise around. I hope that my mom and dad are proud of what I'm doing for my country and for them too. "Ha" what just happened, as I look to my right I see my partner go down, now I'm scared.